~ Ivy_The_Mermaid
Thursday, September 5, 2013
My Fantastic Name.
Ivanna Lynette Esser-Whidden. My name is 25 letters long. It means 'a gift from god'. But everyone knows me by just the 3 simple letters that make up Ivy. I have been swimming a little over three quarters of my life. I also use to play softball , but I was terrible. I own four dogs , 2 cats , 2 guinea pigs , 8 fish and 2 birds. My favorite though is my dog , Razor. My mom and I share the same middle name - Lynette. Pink is also our favorite color. I am a lifeguard , and I have saved 14 people from drowning in the past four months. Quick fact : I love fall out boy. Yes , I have two last names, Esser is my moms , while Whidden is my dads , thus we have Esser-Whidden. My little brother , Lex also took both last names. He is always telling people "Ivy is incredibly insane. " he even taped a sign that read that to my door once before, Of course I ripped it down. So now that I told part of my story - go off and have an adventure , but do not step in poison ivy ! That stuff is crazy.
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Great job ! I loved it <3333
ReplyDeleteI agree.
DeleteI agree
DeleteI liked how you told us about yourself. It was different & it really showed your personality.
ReplyDeleteVery funny and entertaining , I like how you talked about your life and your family and pets
ReplyDeleteI liked yours because you put emotion and your personality into it and it made your poem better.
ReplyDeleteI like how you used the poison ivy sentence which was based off your nickname "Ivy".
ReplyDeleteI liked how you in operated the meaning of your name in who you are.
ReplyDeleteI also love Fall Out Boy (: and I didn't know you were a lifeguard, that's pretty cool. Nice job.
ReplyDeleteFOB <33333333
DeleteI like our ending it was good, also I liked how you explained the background about your name
ReplyDeleteI loved it, it was different from the everybody else's, you told your story along with your name and made it enjoyable.
ReplyDeleteI liked how you told about yourself in the Poem and how you worded it is exactly how you talk so it was more personal.
ReplyDeleteAgreed (:
DeleteI really liked that last remark. It was pretty clever. You kinda went on too long about other stuff though instead of your name.
ReplyDeleteGood job. I like how the poem wasn't just about your name.
ReplyDeleteYour poem was great and I liked how you talked about yourself and what you liked. Good job!
ReplyDeleteI liked how you wrote how people know you by three simple letters. Cause your not simple your very unique. I also really loved the ending (:
ReplyDeleteIvy, what happened that you have saved 14 people?
ReplyDeleteWhen they were drowning and junk
DeleteI love the poison ivy ending, it was very comical. By the way, fall out boy is absolutely amazing.
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DeleteGood job I liked your poison ivy reference at the end
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